i made a flyer for my 3rd multigenre and i believe it was pretty nice. How ever my current status on my ARP is still in progress. i am still writing my actual results page. i have found it interesting that my hypothosis so far has been proven right. Many student athletes have been accepted into better schools than the student. I believe it to be safe to say that overall an athlete is more succesfull academically and socialy. but dnt take it wrong if your not an athlete.

how can i improve this ???feedback pleaseee

Screenplay

                        In Class Based on a true story the following names have been altered to protect the identities of those involved.

 

Ms. Artinez-just a teacher

Jimmy-Baseball player

Alex- student council vp

Tommy- football player and treasurer of student council

Chelsea- that one girl everyone hates because she is so smart

 

Teacher: Get in the classroom! If the bell rings your late and your getting a referral!

(students shuffling in)

Teacher: Ok settle down. Get your books out and turn to page 303. Pass your summaries up to the front. Who didn’t do their assignment?

Jimmy (the baseball player) raises his hand

Teacher: You didn’t need to raise your hand; I figured most jocks wouldn’t do the assignment anyways.

Jimmy: But Miss I just wanted to ask what page you wanted us to open our book to. I have the assignment right here.

Teacher: ok well turn to page 303. Who wants to read?

Jimmy, tommy and alex raise their hands.

Teacher: We need someone who can read quickly, Alex why don’t you read?

Alex goes on to read 2 pages and is then stopped by Ms. Artinez

Teacher:  Chelsea, why don’t you go ahead and read

Chelsea: im sorry Ms. I have a sore throat and can barely talk

Teacher: Well since nobody else wants to participate. Tommy go ahead and read.

Tommy begins to read and after a brief pause, the teacher stops him and begins to read herself.

Tommy: why didn’t you let me continue Ms?

Teacher: We don’t want to be here forever.

Tommy: Are you serious? Why did you let Alex read for so long without you stopping her, I read faster then her I just needed to catch a breath?

Teacher: Do you even know what we are reading about? I mean all you athletes are the same, you guys try to act like good students, but all your doing Is annoying everyone else. You guys need..

Jimmy:  I have a 3.5 so I wouldn’t know what your talking about, I think that’s better than half these nerds in here.

Tommy: as a matter a fact, we are reading about how atoms are the basic building blocks of ordinary matter, And how an atom has an electron cloud consisting of negatively charged electrons surrounding a dense nucleus.

Teacher: wow that’s a first, did you and your team come up with that on your own? Or did you just read it from your cheat sheet?

Multi genre 2

here is my next multigenre project please give feedback on format or content. Screenplay

The following script takes place in class based and is based on a true story the following names have been altered to protect the identities of those involved.

Characters

Ms. Artinez-just a teacher

Jimmy-Baseball player

Alex- student council vp

Tommy- football player and treasurer of student council

Chelsea- that one girl everyone hates because she is so smart

Situation

As the teacher arrives, Students are outside waiting to go into class just before the bell rings. Once in class they are asked to voluntarily read.

Teacher

Get in the classroom! If the bell rings your late and your getting a referral!

(Students shuffling in background)

Teacher

 Ok settle down. Get your books out and turn to page 303. Pass your summaries up to the front. Who didn’t do their assignment?

(Jimmy raises his hand)

Teacher

 You didn’t need to raise your hand; I figured most jocks wouldn’t do the assignment anyways.

Jimmy

 But Miss I just wanted to ask what page you wanted us to open our book to. I have the assignment right here.

Teacher

ok well turn to page 303. Who wants to read?

(Jimmy, Tommy and Alex raise their hands.)

Teacher

 We need someone who can read quickly, Alex why don’t you read?

(Alex goes on to read 2 pages and is then stopped by Ms. Artinez )

Teacher

Chelsea, why don’t you go ahead and read

Chelsea

 I’m sorry Ms. I have a sore throat and can barely talk

Teacher

Well since nobody else wants to participate. Tommy go ahead and read.

(Tommy begins to read and after a brief pause, the teacher stops him and begins to read herself.)

Tommy

Why didn’t you let me continue Ms?

Teacher

We don’t want to be here forever.

Tommy

 Are you serious? Why did you let Alex read for so long without you stopping her, I read faster then her I just needed to catch a breath?

Teacher

Do you even know what we are reading about? I mean all you athletes are the same, you guys try to act like good students, but all your doing Is annoying everyone else. You guys need...

(Mr. Artinez is interrupted by jimmy before she can even finish criticizing)

Jimmy

I have a 3.5 so I wouldn’t know what your talking about, I think that’s better than half these nerds in here.

Tommy

As a matter a fact, we are reading about how atoms are the basic building blocks of ordinary matter, and how an atom has an electron cloud consisting of negatively charged electrons surrounding a dense nucleus.

Teacher

 Wow that’s a first, did you and your team comes up with that on your own? Or did you just read it from your cheat sheet?

Multigenre

This week i have spent some time touching up my intro and methodology in the university writting center. I also began my multigenre part of the project. I will be writting a feature news article on the story of Myron Rolles, the fsu football player who chose Oxford over millions.

IM BACK

Hey Guys sorry i have not been bloggin but i was sick for 3 weeks... The following is a link to a survey i have created. Your honest answers will be of great help to my research paper. http://www.surveymonkey.com/s.aspx?sm=jkbHh4eCOlcrqw2I_2bLzTig_3d_3d .. I have started my intro and methodology today and it will hopefully be completed today as well.......

help

today i attended a class on the bible which opened my eyes to the possibility of changing my research topic. I intend to go into depth on the bible and its misinterpretations by many religious denominations . Such a topic can be narrowed down to ..is there a hell? or eternal damnation? why or why not? for a subject like this however i will have to do very intense research. What do u think about my potentially new research subject??

DUMB QUESTIONS

DQ: When u play basketball does global warming will affect your ability to dribble up and down the baseball field?

WCQ: who has the best resume currently in the PGA, Vijay Singh or Bernhard Langer?

FWQ: are you sick at playing madden 09?

TCOTWQ: What are your thaughts on using Nuclear Power?

JQ: When on the mound, do you keep your weight back when coming up to your lift to maintain the center of gravity so that you elbow speed may be consistent with your weight transfer?

TKSQ: T.O, how many teams have you played with through out your career, what was your salary, and why did you leave ?

DQ: What type of  career would you like your son to pursue?

LQ: Should pete rose be in the hall of fame?

HQ; Do you think your fans are happy with the news of you and steroids?

FOQ: Do you take batting lessons?

           IF so, has it helped?

           if so, how much has it helped?